Idea was good but the VO didn't match the lines being drawn in your shots. I think you could have done a better job in planning out the timing of the lines along with your script. You could have also used more angles or at least secure the paper down so that it didn't move. Audio was good. 3.2 points
In class we are learning about the bad effects of vaping and we also made a PSA to reach out to other people.